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for The Silent Urge Series

by Druffine

person Kitsune Morgan
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
alright reading and having my brian shut down. MMM naked Xander, and Naked Spike. Please say that there will be more. Please, please! And note I don't beg all that often.
person MsSpikester
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about not reviewing sooner...my computer was making protests when I would click on something - think I have it fixed now. Love this story (and we all knew Spike was the Giles of his day, lol) one suggestion...in the last chapter (15) BIB II - Xander talks about wanting to bite Spikes nibbles....in english I think you are trying to say nipples (you know, the pointy tips of the breasts) I for one would love to lick and suck Spikes nipples, so I am just peachy with the whole story, ,but earlier you mentioned help was needed as you didn't speak ish ish first....Hope you aren't mad at me, just trying to help you out.
Keep writing this one - you obviously know what you are doing, so keep it up!! (no pun intended, lol)
person Vampirella
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Druffine, what can I say? Another great chapter from you. I'll be patiently (or maybe not-so-patiently) biding my time until the next chapter. ;-)
person EquusDraco
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe.. Giles-Spike.
person Lostgirl
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you *want* to see a grown woman beg? Well, yeah, you probably do . . . MORE! Please! Pretty please! Pretty please with Xander and Spike on top!!
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Like this chappy. SexyHot ridge-licky face sex! And I simply LOVE the image of Xander and Spike all cuddly in the bed. Mmmm... Preeeety boys.

::licks::

More, please!
person aether
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely adored the story and can't wait to see it finished! I love your charecterisation of Xander, please keep writting.
person Lostgirl
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MONA!!! Pleeaase move!! I'll give you catnip! It's the good home grown kind!! PLEASE MOVE MONA!! :-)

Ohhh!! It's lovely! Xander's so damn cute it's practically criminal!! MORE PLEASE!!
person Mandylynn
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14

Oh, drat! Kitty...I'm sure there's another spot that's just as comfy as the Spander lovin' pages to lay... *whimpers* More, please!
person _insanity
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... Why must it end? I was having fun reading this...