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for With a Little Help

by MadRog

person Tre
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM

Please keep this coming. I'm really enjoying it and I want to keep doing so.
person Ken
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm having a ball with this story. I check in at lease once a day to see if its been updated, and I'm delighted when I find that it is. Thanks!
person bansheeh
schedule February 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM


Yes!!!!!!

Love it................ this is so on the right track... just dont go to fast ...
make it a good fic, not just a quick one....thhoulhould have problems on the way and many of them...
its what makes it fun........... u now , the thing you shouldnt want, but in secret you do.....

Let them steal kisses and such ... dont let them have sex to soon , ok.....
make them squirm.....

Loving spike in this fic.... Playing it cool , so of the good*****

Thats what he should have done in the show.....
(and not "im-in-love-with-you-and-there-fore-im-mean-to-you-dumbass he played in the show before crush)

UPDATE SOON**


{}bansheeh{}



person bansheeh
schedule January 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
soooo could doc/batman be reily ???????
person bamsheeh
schedule January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON*
person crunchberry
schedule January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job on Chapter one - decided to read it over here instead of on ff.net - hoping more graphics over here! LOL. Good imagery on the different types of demons.