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for Acting The Part

by patty

person Jerrica
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like William being such a softy. And that question is bound to make for some interesting conversation in the future.

Please update soon!
person ScreamingFlamingos
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEA! YOU'RE BACK! I'm SOOOOOOOOO glad you added another chapter! This has got to be one of my favorite fantasy stories! I mean it! I need another chapter SOON! Besides, this chapter didn't have any good spuffy-lovin' in it! Come on, just type some more...you can do it! :-)

Screaming Flamingos
person Dee
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Always so glad to see you updating your stories. This was a very sweet chapter. Is the proposal much further off? Will we get the big sweet weding to end this love story? What every you decide it will be worth reading.
person Elly
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's really good to see you back on your feet and updating! We've all missed your stories!
person Poetlover
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story. This was a lovely chapter. William trying to buy Melanie everything, his concern on the boat ride, the conversation about children, it was all wonderful.

I'm glad to see that you're back. I was sorry to read about your dad. I send you my deepest and most heartfelt sympathy.
person azrielle
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME! Can't wait for more.
person ForzenInForeverDarkness
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just so adorable! Your doing such a great job at it, I truly wish to read more of your glorious fanfiction. Please keep writing!
person pixiecorn
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was soooooooooo kool

i loved it and i hope she does have more kids with william


neway i hope you update REAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLY soon
person SilverCircle
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely as always! I really am enjoying this story. You place the characters so well in ther AU environment that I really could get kind of envious :).
Please go on and update quick. I can't wait to read more.
Hugs, SilverCircle
person Cancan227
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Everyday I look forward to re-readeig it.Can't wait for a new chapter and the point where maybe Buffy & Mel meets his parents or grandparents or both!!!!!!!