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schedule
March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!
schedule
March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww that's so sweet!!
I have to tell you, though, when I read the summary I was kinda scared with the whole "and her daughter" situation. Maybe you should clear that up?
More soon, pretty please? :)
I have to tell you, though, when I read the summary I was kinda scared with the whole "and her daughter" situation. Maybe you should clear that up?
More soon, pretty please? :)
schedule
March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Patty Anne
I only have these words for you......MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE MORE.....NEED I GO ON......LOL.....OKAY...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.......
Kimber
I only have these words for you......MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE MORE.....NEED I GO ON......LOL.....OKAY...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.......
Kimber
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Cute!
::grins::
more, please!
::grins::
more, please!
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi
please continue this. It has me hooked and waiting for more!!
please continue this. It has me hooked and waiting for more!!
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes. More, please. Lovin' it.
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love how you have this story and the moment that you really caught me was he last sentence.."Do "Do you have any pets?"
It was a perfect save for the little Mel.....and it made me want to say.....MORE PLEASE!\\\
Kimber
It was a perfect save for the little Mel.....and it made me want to say.....MORE PLEASE!\\\
Kimber
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it's so cute! I love this first chapter and can't wait for the rest of the story ;-)
At first I was wondering about Melanie's brown curls and blue eyes, but then you wrote about Angel being the father...are we sure he's the real one?!?! I'm dying to see what will happen next :P
I'm pretty sure I've read all your fics anywhere I could find them and I loved them all; and I'm also sure that I'm going to keep reading them :D
Love,
messy
At first I was wondering about Melanie's brown curls and blue eyes, but then you wrote about Angel being the father...are we sure he's the real one?!?! I'm dying to see what will happen next :P
I'm pretty sure I've read all your fics anywhere I could find them and I loved them all; and I'm also sure that I'm going to keep reading them :D
Love,
messy
schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tooooooo damn cute. Him, Melanie, the story, everything!! Loved it more pleas :D
Sarah
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Sarah
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schedule
March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, ink ink that i'm more in love with Melanie than i am with William St.John at the moment...she is so cute!
Keep this one up, i'm really liking it! :D
Nicky
Keep this one up, i'm really liking it! :D
Nicky