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for Acting The Part

by patty

person Nicky
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bowing down to your greatness....again. How do you do it?

I am entranced by this story. William, Buffy, Melanie...I don't know if i'm more in love with them or



:D

I really do hope that Melanie gets her new Daddy...i really, REALLY do.

So, keep it up. I will pay you...(i mean with reviews...as if i have money to give away.)

:P

Nicky
person Beth
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like all of your stories, including this one! Interesting plot line, I like Melanie's character, she's a cutie. You got me hooked on Blue Eyed Devil as well! I like Back Where We Belong, any updates on that one in the works? Thanks for updating, can't wait to see how these develop.
person Skip Ward
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I so look forward to updates to your story. I think your characters are wonderful and I don't think I've laughed so hard while reading a story in a long time. Thank you for sharing your wonderful and very cute story with us and I hope you write lots more to share with us.
person JD
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Melanie seems so cute. Update soon, please.
person T
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly adore this story. it is so sweet and lovely and makes me smile every time. i cant wait for more...i just hope Dru wont mess things up...right? wimper...more please
person Sunnygal
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this story, and I honestly don't usually read a lot of AU fic...You make Buffy with child seem perfecnatunatural, and I can't decide which of the three wonderful characters I like the best...ok, I lie, luv William/Spike...lol. Anyhow, very enjoyable read, and am waiting eagerly for more. Gotta run now...and check out everything else you're written!
person Azrielle6969
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! The way William is with little Melanie...OH Way too sweet!!! Please continue, I check for ups das daily! (Ok so like five times a day...what life?)
person Ellie D
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww. this is so adorable!! i can't wait for you to update!!! by the way, all of your stories rock!!
~Ellie
person shell
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this is my favourite story of yours so far! i love it please keep updating soon!!!!
person Kimber
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH

It just keeps getting better and better.....I think this is my all time favorite story in the human AU ever.......I really do love it.....and him looking at Dru and asking whay she was cranky was the best........LOL


Kimber