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for Acting The Part

by patty

person Emma
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! OMG.... Anyway, write more soon, I'm really loving this story, probably one of your best!
person Marnie
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more! I can't wait to see what happens.
person Caroline
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally in love with your story ; the moment between Buffy and William saying that he would love to kiss her was worth the wait.
I adore the wou wou write , so suggestive , and beautiful. Always impatient to know more about Buffy's reaction , learning the stunning news : her little treasure of a daughter is incorrigible!
person Karen
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tehehe, William's going to be Melanie's new daddy. Tehehe. That is so cute! I can't wait for Buffy's reaction or to see if William really does call.
person bigfan
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM

God I love this story

Please update as fast as you can, you can't keep me waiting, please please please!!

Is Spike gonna be her new daddy???????????????

I do hope so... :D

person Elanor
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE it!!! Didn't see the daddy thing coming!! It's so perfect!! Acting the Part and Blue Eyed Devil are the BEST Spuffy I've EVER read!!!! They should be updated tommorrow!!! :) Longer chapters, please
person Witchie
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally delightful. Melanie is a doll. She makes me want to scoop her up and hold her tight. You've done a very good job showing how the right response to a shy child will work wonders in giving them the self-confidence to express themselves. Love it. :) Keep up the good work.
person lolita
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh girl this chapter was just too funny - Melanie is so adorable! it is such a typicalld tld thing to do - Aww I so can't wait for more - so you'd better be updating soon *shaking my fist menacingly* - sorry too many Simpsons episodes. ;)
person gattaca
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh lawd! That's funny! 'Her new daddy.' Buffy must be in a state of shock with that lil comment. :P I LOVE this story to bits! Melanie is SO cute! You do an awesome job of characterizing her character. I just love love love it and can't wait for more! :D
person TiggerM1302
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the cutest and sweetest story I have read so far! Keep up the great work! My favorite chapter so far has got to be #5! I can't wait till the next chapter is up! Please HURRY!!!!!!!!!!

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