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for Acting The Part

by patty

person October
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love love love LOVE this story! I always look forward to your updates!


Soon, please?
person Anon
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could crawl into your brain so I could know what happens next in this story and in Blue Eyed Devil. Please update before I go out of my mind!!!!!
person MaryAnn
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!! this is the cutest story i have ever read. Melanie is the cutest little girl and william is wonderful with her. He would make an excellent step-father, bringing her out of her shell of shyness. And the obvious chemestry between him and buffy. I can't wait for the smut to start. keep up the great work and please update soon. ps. I loved when melanie told will, that mommy said "dru must have pms". that was priceless.
person Kar
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. Buffy's dirty little dream about William.. thehehe.... lovely
person C.B.
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darlin', you are my minister of classy, plot driven pervyness. Hell, that ain't even a word, but I had to get it out there. Love you, love your fic, you make me happy. I ain't got much that makes me happy these days, so keep rockin' in the free world, baby-doll! Her little fantasy/dream sequence was fabulous. I feel her pain.;)
person Samolly
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love all your AU fiction! They are so sweetly Spuffy!!!! I can't wait to see how the fist date turns out!
person willowmouse
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL - This is such a great story - all the interaction with Melanie is so sweet and then you've got all the "other" stuff - great work, some of your best I think :)
person Alicia
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the sweetest story. I love Melanie and Spike- breaks my heart how sweet he is :-) Can't wait for the update.
person willowmouse
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story ... its so sweet & then you go and put lines in like "I've never wanted to kiss a women as much as It tot to kiss you"! Dam ! cant wait for more -
person sluggie
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out to be one of my all time favs. I could just kiss YOU for this:

"So, I'll call you?" he murmure"Ok"Okay." She nearly leapt out of her skin when his hand ran
down her arm and found hers, then gave it a firm squeeze.
He hesitated one more time. "Buffy?"
"Hmm?"
Leaning close, he whispered in her ear, "I'm not gonna try it, but I
want you to know that I've never wanted to kiss a woman as badly
as I want to kiss you right now."

Walks away feeling all ::tingly::