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by patty

person Nicky
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want a William for myself! What are the chances do you reckon? Slim to none?

Ah well, i guess i'll just have to keep enjoying yours.

Which i am by the way, enjoying it very much. They are all so sweet.


BTW, you didn't mess up at all. Me and my sister both have blue eyes, and my Mum and Dad both have brown.

AND my hair is naturally blonde, whereas the others have brown, straighir. ir.

So, don't worry about it.

:D

Nicky
person Celestria
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Omg this is awesome, Even with no Sex! and I'm like a sex addict lol.... it's so cute more more more please
person Irissss
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and look forward to the updates.
person spikedchick
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I really love your story!
Although at first I thought it'd probably bother me that Buffy already has a child it'it's just so sweet so ... yep. I like it!
l-u-v ... chick
person C.B.
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
People actually caught eye color? Holy Hell. My mom and dad have brown and blue, and ended up with brown, blue and green for kids eyeballs. Was mom with the mailman to get the green? I fuckin' hope not. Maybe since my grandad had green has something to do with it. People that are this picky need a cig and a beer and perhaps think about chilling the hell out. Don't sweat it, baby. Just tell your story.
person Witchie
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, those brats! I hope William goes to show and tell and shows those kids a thing or two. I think it's great he took her to a Japanese restaurant and LOL over the Sushi bar. Great story. I'm loving it. It's the best part of my day when I see this has updated.
person Annette
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aak! But I can't wait another second for the kiss either! Absolutely loving everything about this story.
person AnneLiz
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh... William is so sweet!!
Melanie loves him, and he loves her... and Buffy, of course!
I can't wait to read more! ^__^
person gattaca
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* Damn..........I love this story so much!! It's just so..................perfect! This has got to be one of my favorite stories. It puts a smile on my face everytime I read it! I think I'ma go read it again. :) I hope we get an update soon! :D
person bridget
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story. i can't wait for some william and buffy alone time.