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for Acting The Part

by patty

person Mindy
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!!
person elle
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i totally love this story!!! and i can't wait for the next part :))
person Elise
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect -- absolutley perfect. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction and Melanie's excitment. Update TODAY!!!
person Hannah
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ie Wie William, I want him!! But, I'll settle for updates. This is a brilliant story, as usual !!
person Caroline
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A lovelier fiction doesn't exist.. It's a piece of gold , and each time I read a new chapter life is wonderful.A pure delight.
person Lyric
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE!!!! MORE!!!!!
I am swooning like a girly-girl! William St. James sounds like every girl's dream! Now if only you could corporealize him and send him my way!
Please please please write more! I am not above bribing!
person Andi
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is awesome. I love your style of writing, how you develop your idea - which is very original by the way - and especially the characterization. Melanie is just adorable, and William seems sweet and perfect - he's every girl's dream and exactly what Buffy and her daughter need. I'm glad Buffy doesn't push him away even though she's been disappointed by Angel who was simply incapable of not acting like a complete wanker, as Spike would say.
I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read what happens next!
person Annette
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read what William and Buffy are going to do with their "alone time".
person Suza
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!!! Pretty please with a cherry on top!
person clau019
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so loving this story, it's so sweet (gotta love sweet Spike).
Keep up the great work! :)