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This chapter was so sweet! I can't wait for Angel to find out!

OK. I gotta tell you, I'm not usually one for mushy, 'awwe, that's so sweet!' reads, but come on! He was reading her 'Charlote's Web'! What kid hasn't read that book and cried when they realized that Charlote was leaving Wilbur after all they'd been through...
You really know how to tugthe the heart strings, P.A.

omg, i totally am in love with the sweet persona of William/Spike. i'm totally in love w/ this story too. please continue!!!

I'm hanging onto your every word just like Melanie and Buffy are hanging onto Williams.

You're writing is amazing, and chapters like this make me tingle.

He's just the most perfect man in the world, and I've never, EVER seen him written better than this.

Please, i think my head may explode if you don't update soon.

Nicky

Another great chapter! Really enjoying this, so much!

When I think I can't be more delighted , you prove me wrong ...
This chapter was full of wonderful moments : in the school , when Melanie is sitting quietly on his lap , and other children are all around ; the erotic sight of Buffy eating her ice-cream and William willing to use his tongue ( is it hot in there ? ) to lick it off , when Buffy finds them, peaceful , in Melanie's room , and the words he's reading are so meaningful , so full of promises.
I'm fond of your story , like i'm fond of your William ( but I love Buffy and Melanie , too ! ) ; you have a way to picture him that is so beautiful , but feel real, it makes me want to cry .
Thank you for being a sensitive and so stunning storyteller.

Wonderful story and writing. Please continue.

First, Angels an idiot!!!! Another great chapter. Im bowing down again, you write the hotness that was 'Fun and Games' then post the sweetness which was this chapter. In case you missed it the first thirty million times - I LOVE this story, can't wait for more.
Sarah
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That was sooo sweet!! I just love this fic ...

i love this story. pleeze continue