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for Acting The Part

by patty

person Emma
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so romantic and sweet. Melanie is the perfect touch that brings Spike and Buffy together. I love your writing style, especially in this fic, so please please keep writing it and update ! Em!
person Azrielle6969
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! AWESOME. I loved your descriptions. Amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person spikegirl
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Of all the WIPs that are out there right now this is probably my favorite, I absolutely love it! In fact I was about to e-mail you asking (politely, :) for new updates when I saw that you already had! Oh, please don't keep us waiting, you're just too damn good! Oh, and also, evil. I wanna read the conversation about Angel! I hope the asshole shows up at some point and that Spike kicks his ass!!
person Nicky
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes...tell him about her father!

Now!

Ok, maybe not RIGHT NOW, but I demand an update.

I loved that so much, with all the "i want to make love to you"s and the "wonderful"s.

Give us more...

Nicky
person Kimber
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN

They finally came up for air.....now you had better not leave me waiting too long....I'm really hooked on this one and Blue-eyed devil.....man can't really decide which one to beg for next....guess I will read the one and beg for the other and reverse it on the next one....if that makes sense.....LOL!

Man this chapter was hot....and I can't wait for his reaction to shit head daddy Angel smangel discripton....

Kimber
person Skyclad8
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like this story. It's so sweet, pretty much what every girl dreams of in a man.
person Burnz
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good story. It is sweet without being so overly cutesy that it would make you want to gag. Good job. I look forrward to your updates.
person Kar
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tell us more? Please? Loving the story with Spike and Buffy, the passion and quick friendship that they have. I sort of hope that Melanie finds him in bed with Buffy, waking him up with her squeals of delight.
person caroline
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i need MORE! this is my drug, and i'm not yet stoned!!!i want to be!!!! please, i want it so badly!!! more spuffy, i demand it! and since i demand it, you must obey me since i am GOD!!
person Nicole
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story ROCKS!! I've become a HUGE fan of yours, not because the smut is hot, Hot, HOT (which, it is) but because the plot is exciting; the characters are GREAT - Melanie's adorable; Buffy is beleivable; and William is sweet, sexy, shy.l thl the things JM is. Please continue the great job - it's thoroughly enjoyed! :)

Thank you,
Nikki