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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have got to say, this is the sweetest story I have ever read. I say it like every time I review, but I love it so much. It's so fluffy and happy, but not cheesy fluff, cuz that's annoying. And about your writing style: there is not one thing I would change about this plot, it's absolutely perfect! This is definitely your best story.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No! I don't think you were overdoing it with Angel's personality at all, it gives way to why exactly Buffy and Melanie are the way they are. Anyway, what I really wanted to say was I LOVE this story. Its getting so hard to find very well written spuffy stories that aren't SO completely cliche, this one was like finding coffee for free the week of finals. :D I love all your stories, but this one has to be my favorite. Keep up the excellent work!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter...the ending....AHHHH!!!!!!!! I don't think you're making him out to be too bad. Most of what was stated in this chapter was already foreshadowed in the previous ones. I think the way you've drawn him in the chapter is just more of an explanation of what we kalrealready.
Chris
Chris
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you making Angel horrhorrible?? Not at all! :) Well, that is, unless you DON'T want him to be the bad guy. lol
"Buffy....I want to be her father." Awe!!! Iso iso in love with this story!!p itp it up! :) Please update soon!!!!
"Buffy....I want to be her father." Awe!!! Iso iso in love with this story!!p itp it up! :) Please update soon!!!!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those last two chappys were totally hot!!!!!!!! I love how they interact with one another- they are both so sweet and responsible and loving- yet completely passionate. Can't wait for the next update :-)
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I want the whole fairytale please. I want them together as a family ASAP - I don't care if it is "too soon". I want Buffy to have the opposite experience she had with Angel(spit) - no such thing as TOO evil for him - when she tells William/Spike that they are going to have a baby together. I want all the hearts and flowers. And I want you to rub Angel's nose in it as well. - Sorry getting a little overwrought here. I will continue to love your story whichever way you write it.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Up to chapter 4 so far. Bwahahahaaaa I thought for sure you were actually going to use Julie Bitchlin Bro... errr I mean Julie Caitlin Brown as the "rules lady" it sounded so much like her. teehee Great story, enjoying it quite a lot.
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was wonderful!! really great, no words for it
so lovely
i love your stories, i think you're a great writer and make interesting stories with interesting plots, you really cover them all
i hope now we begin some angel bashing fest!! yuhuuuu ;)
so lovely
i love your stories, i think you're a great writer and make interesting stories with interesting plots, you really cover them all
i hope now we begin some angel bashing fest!! yuhuuuu ;)
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Pattyanne
I have to say I love this story. The concept of it beginning at a convention has to be every fan's dream and the slow build up and lingering touches were fabulous. But now that they've actually got together, you can feel for them both and their burgeoning love is truly beautiful. You've described everything brilliantly and the pride and love William feels for Melanie as well as Buffy is gorgeous. Huge congrats on this story and all your others (which are all just as good) and looking forward eagerly to reading more.
Joolz
I have to say I love this story. The concept of it beginning at a convention has to be every fan's dream and the slow build up and lingering touches were fabulous. But now that they've actually got together, you can feel for them both and their burgeoning love is truly beautiful. You've described everything brilliantly and the pride and love William feels for Melanie as well as Buffy is gorgeous. Huge congrats on this story and all your others (which are all just as good) and looking forward eagerly to reading more.
Joolz
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fictions I've ever read. I love it!! Please update soon.