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It wat wanted to say that this is the sweetest spuffy fanfiction I've ever read. You are doing a wonderful job with it and no, I don't think you're overdoing it with angel, it's ok. Please, keep on updating, I'm always looking forward the next chapter. Thank you.

Nope, I don't think you are being to hard on Angel. I had a relative that married a guy just like that. A sad thing it is too. Everything was a showdown between affection for him or her son. It happens.

Pattyanne, Angel has to be a complete and total bastard. That's the only explanation for him abandoning a sweetie like Melanie. The child is damn near perfect and adorable. For him not to love her, he has to be awful. Don't worry about it. Just about melted when Spike said he wanted to be her father. Sigh...so good.

this is a FANTASTIC fic and im lovin every chappie! please update soon and feed my addiction! oh and by the way you can never be to horrible about angel because urrgg I HATE HIM!!!!!!! again please please please update soon!

pattyanne.....angel can NEVER be too horrible. i mean he's.......angel. ugh, enough said. i'm very pleased/a wit with your ending. pleased b/c HELLO! William wants to be in her life!!! yay! angry b/c it's a cliffhanger **growls and shakes fist angrily** CONTINUE WITH FASTER UPDATES!!! I NEED THEM, DAMMIT!

Ok, all caught up now, with the story and in the story. 't w't wait for an update. And NO, you are not making Angel out to be too horrible. It is kind of how he was appearing to be at the end of this season IMO.

You're not overdoing Angel....compared to Spike, he is a dick!!!!!

No, you didn't overdo it with Angel.

He's a asshole. whahahahahhah

It fits the story!!

Cynthia

Your story is great I can't wait for more. I just love little Melenie
BTY thats my sis- law- name.
and No Angel is not so bad you should see Melenie with her children
and the way she treats them and my baby brother (her hubby)
they have a new baby Kyliegh will be 2 weeks old sunday
and the other day she was feeding her and when she fixed her bottle
she put 3oz of water to 2 schops of milk when it should have been 1 1/2 schops
and at night she puts 1 schops to 3oz of water
needless to say they baby is now 6ib and I ca't remember how many ozs
but she weighed 7ib 10oz at brith. and she call's her oldest daughter a little bitch
Now she can by a little bitch LOL but you have to make her made.
but Mel just call's her that all the time. My brohter can'topen his mouth B/C he's scared
that she'll take the kids and leave they also have a little boy.

so No Angel is not so bad in this story it's not something I haven't seen before
and will see soon in my family.

keep up the good work. and keep the chappies comeing

Love sweet and loving William. It's great how much he thinks of Melanie. Looking forward to the trip to Disneyland.