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for Acting The Part

by patty

person azrielle6969
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More...hurry or she'll be all pruney...
person Annette
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Looking forward to Disneyland.
person Nicky
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Either I've missed one or you posted two, but either way I'm very impressed.

William is so sweet with Melanie it just makes me tingle when I read it. Every girl who has no father needs a William.

I mean...A SHAMU WHALE?

Aaanyway...onto the part that REALLY counts. That was hot! So sweet and hot all at the same time. I could just picture him miming 'very sexy' to her with his trademark look on his face, and then talking about the ratings of their day later on.

*sigh*

Thanks

Nicky

xxx
person Addie Logan
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absely ely love this story. Probably my favorite Buffy AU story of all time. I'm reading it for the third time now, keeping myself from being bored at work. I don't know what I'd do without your fics...probably have to actually do my job. :) I also wanted to let you know that it's perfectly possible for Melanie to have blue eyes if one parent has brown eyes and the other has hazel. My father's eyes are hazel and my mom's are brown, but mine are blue. So it's not a goof. It's genetically possible.
person Roz
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like! And I can't wait to see what a double X rating means!
person skyclad8
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Done!!
person clau019
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter 19!! Specially the last part. It was all so, so sweet between them!! Loved it! :)
person TweedleDee
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Patty
It made perfect sense, except for the part where you cut the spuffy loving right at the good part!!!!!!!!!!
person Kar
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is it getting hot in here? Shew... that was terrific!
person white rabbit
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it made perfect sence to me...is it possible to die smiling? cus this story is so sweet an sexy my face is aching from the fixed grin it induces, when i'm feeling blue, just reading one of your stories makes me feel all better again. so please write more soon.
ps. any chance on an update on sweet sixteen?