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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really...fucking...love him.
And you.
This story just makes me go all squiggly EVERY time i read it. I love William, and Buffy, and Melanie and ANGEL for being such an idiot. You've really made me smile with this chapter.
Nicky xxx
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story's still just as good. Keep going!
I really liked William's reaction to Angel; the fact that he didn't lower himself to Angel's level and did his best to keep Melanie comfortable, while still not backing down completely. That he lost himself in Buffy's eyes to the point when he didn't even remember Angel was present was just too sweet.
I predict that the father-daughter bonding will turn sour, and I bet it will be the dead-beat's fault.
Update soon!
I really liked William's reaction to Angel; the fact that he didn't lower himself to Angel's level and did his best to keep Melanie comfortable, while still not backing down completely. That he lost himself in Buffy's eyes to the point when he didn't even remember Angel was present was just too sweet.
I predict that the father-daughter bonding will turn sour, and I bet it will be the dead-beat's fault.
Update soon!
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was everything I had hoped for and more!!!! :) Soooooo very much worth the wait! Please update soon -- the future looks so very promising! I especially loved the ending words :)
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story. And this chapter was wonderful. I loved seeing Angel posturing and William (mostly) not. The difference in Melanie's reactions to her father and William was alos great.
I look forward to more.
I look forward to more.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You never fail to impress! Admitedly not the fist fight I was dreaming of, you know the one where Spike knocks out all of Angels teeth, but this might be even Better!!! Don't keep us waiting for the next chapter, it's addictive and I go through withdrawalls when there aren't any new chapters
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH at last.......I have been looking and looking.....LOL
But you have left me still wondering on Angel's big news......I love how Spike was the gentleman...I hope we see more soon.......
Kimber
But you have left me still wondering on Angel's big news......I love how Spike was the gentleman...I hope we see more soon.......
Kimber
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well i'd say William won that male pissing contest lol (never any doubt here!) wonderful work as always!
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really only have one word to describe this: BEAUTIFUL. OMG- that was SO perfectly beautiful, and that ending. I was literally laughing outloud. Nicely done.
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October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Hey, notice me! I only wear and drive
the very best! You WISH you were half as important
as I am!" and "Driving around
in a new sixty-five thousand dollar car while the mother
of your child has one that's falling apart, you selfish
prick."
are so much more than funny! lol luved the update cant wait for more cya later!
the very best! You WISH you were half as important
as I am!" and "Driving around
in a new sixty-five thousand dollar car while the mother
of your child has one that's falling apart, you selfish
prick."
are so much more than funny! lol luved the update cant wait for more cya later!