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Oh death would be too good for him.....hanging him by something more personal unti they turned blue that would carry much more meaning and make me soooo much happier......

It is time for Melanie to get rid of daddy and get a father....and we all know who that is.

Kimber

I'm late because you of now.

I was about to turn the computer off, but I was compelled to check AFF and low and behold - the kind of update that just wont wait for a few hours.

So...yeah, late now...but I still love you.


I want to go and get Angel with a pitchfork. That bastard. What a way to make an impression upon Buffy's new boyfriend, or Buffy herself for that matter. Even worse, is the impression he has made upon his 'daughter' - and I use the term losely. Like SMG says "Giving sperm does not make you a father."

I can't wait until the next chapter to see William's reaction. I mean his real one - the one he is holding in until Melanie is out of site.

Nicky xxx

i really like this story and i hope that you will update soon

i hope there will be angel bashing soon cuz dont like angel

neway update real soon

thanx for creatin a mad story

very good

I hear the music in the background... Angel is sooooo dead

Poor Melanie! Disneyland hopefully cheers her up.

i think maybe Spike should kick angels ass!! how could he leave melanie like that??? i felt so sorry for her!
update soon please!

God, I can't believe he did that. What a jerk! I'm usually an Angel fan, but for this story he's a jerk. I hope Spike gives him a piece of his mind. Fathers just suck. Anyway, you know I just love this story. It's definitely a favorite of mine, but I love all of your stories. They all kick major ass and you're my favorite author. Okay, just wanted to say that. Please update soon=)

Yeah, you are. Please make it slow and tortuous for Melanie's sake. Poor kid. I hope Spike legally adopts her and soon.

omfg! what is Angels problem? is he defficent? what a complete bastard! yea do kill him plz! poor melanie! :( cya more soon x