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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm sorry, but that was just bad. It was written poorly and it was incredibly unbelievable. cha characters were nothing like they should be, and you really need to work on grammar and spelling. You left out words, misspelled words, and you had multiple run on sentences. Try getting a better Beta, yours obviously is NOT enough.
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October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW very good story, double everyone and double the fun lol Very good writing and story lines.
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi i really liked it but it wud be great if spike went bak 2 dru and buffy got mad and went after drusilla
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September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey lovin the fic even more and now their bk to their time ohh wonder whats gonna happen?!?! please update asap, please!!
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story! please continue! i'm biting my nails, just waiting for an update
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok, i just read through all 19 chapters and this is a great fic!! i really hope you update it soon!!
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have developed a highly intriguing plot, I really like it! You need to slow down, however, bring a bit of prose to your writing. I have trouble with this myself, I am always so eager to get the details out that I forget to deliver them in a pleasing manner. Your story telling is great though! I wkeepkeep on checking for updates, I can't wait to see what you have happen next. Thanks for the story!
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March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I am really itching to find out what happens. PLEASE?!
NZ NEZ
NZ NEZ
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March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so please update soon.
NEONEX
NEONEX
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March 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heya :) jus thought id say great story so far, hurry up n write more :) luv jo