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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you handled pretty well the moment of revelations and truths..William feels loved , both by his ' parents ' and Buffy, and Dawn , and would be able to accept the burden of his unbelievable past. But he will need time , undoubtedly .. I liked the interaction between Buffy, Angel and Spike, there . Your writing style is pleasant to , a , and I enjoy the way you're portraying Buffy, with so much sweetness toward William : a mature woman who is capable of learning from past mistakes.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going.
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!! I can't wait to see how William reacts to what Buffy is about to spring on him. Looking frd trd to the next chapter. Update soon please!!
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Give us more...please. I can't wait for Buffy to tell William, i want to know his reaction.
So...don't hold out on us anymore!
Nicky
So...don't hold out on us anymore!
Nicky
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More! I am hooked this story is great. I just love this William. Please don't let your WIP blow in the wind until it is nothing!!!!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update soon!!!!! I love this story!! Good job!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love the parallel drawn between Angel and his "boys". It is nice to read a story where Angel and Buffy are truly friends with no UST present. Looking forward to more... how William take the news?
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my God, I can't wait! Poor William, he's gonna be devastated! I hope this doesen't ruin what he has with Buffy now, I mean, she's SAID it, she finally said it!! Oh, please, please, don't traumatise him too much!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Shakes with frustrated excitment*
Come on! I can't wait to see what happens! I want to know his reaction when she tells him!
Please!
Nicky
Come on! I can't wait to see what happens! I want to know his reaction when she tells him!
Please!
Nicky