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May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, what she said. ;)
I really must try to give decent reviews, 'excellent, yummy, more please' just doesn't sufficed for every darn fic.
Luv Ditto xxoo
That naughty Xander!
I really must try to give decent reviews, 'excellent, yummy, more please' just doesn't sufficed for every darn fic.
Luv Ditto xxoo
That naughty Xander!
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January 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 Love isn't all THAT funny. But I get what you mean. This is certainly a very thoughtful tale...and well thought-out, too.
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January 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 All right, I have to say this is an intriguing story. Set almost entirely in differing POVs, there is little or no dialogue. Yet it doesn't meander into stream of consciousness dribble but proceeds logically and carefully from one thought to another. Many of the ideas set down here are horrifying and terrible from most people's standpoints but they are made to be understandable. Meaningless sex is played down and stripped to its psychological essence. This is a fine story. Whether you end it here or continue it is immaterial at this point, though I'm certain followup chapters will be as brilliant as the ones that preceded.