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by Azrielle6969

person white rabbit
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so sad and sweet, i like the bits you've added...keep going
person SpikesPrincess1
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up with the next chapter! Its great! :)
person Tygerlily
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg, can there be more? Please tell me that you have more planned for this one! I need more!
This was so sweet and adorable and just *sighs*. That's exactly how that scene should've went. I
thought the same thing when I originally saw the eppi that this scene needed a change and you did
that for me... so YAY

I hope to see more in the near futu
M
Much Luv,
Tygerlily
person Unbridled Brunette
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweetactlactly on target with what I wanted to happen when I first watched the living room scene in "Afterlife". Will there be any more?
person sinj
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww, nice. I really like the idea behind this. It has the promise of being a rather wonderful story. Please continue it! Cheers :o)
person Oreen
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing more. I really like it.
person Tiffany
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww cute I love it
person karen
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH I loved it! So sweet. Are you going to coninue? Please continue
person bettyb
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh-I like this a lot, interesting take on "After Life"---write more soon!! can't wait!