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Oh, oh, oh! Can't wait. Lovely chapter.... want more! Geeze, I can't even write a sentence. Great job!

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but a mean end ;)
can't wait to read about the threesome =D

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You make me a very happy person. Loving this more and more!

Thank God there are people like you in this world!

Nicky

Verrrry verrrry good chapter! ;) I just hope that Buffy doesn't go to jail :( please keep updating!! :)

*sniffles* AWWW!!!!! Poor William!!! *nearly pulls out hair* I can't believe he REALLY thinks Spikey wouldn't want him anymore. Is he INSANE?! Cause the thought of ANYONE not wanting his hot, not-so-little bod is SHEER //INSANITY//!!!!!!!!!!!! ... I'm better now. *smiles* But besides the Woe-is-Willie parts at the end, THIS THE THE GREATEST CHAPTER //EVER//!!!!!!! *grins REAL big* The Spuffy tibits had me grinning form ear-to-ear a la Annie. It's about time that happened, I was THIS CLOSE *holds up index finger a centimeter away from thumb* to abandoning this fic... ... ...Okay, not really. I'm a bad liar. *grins* More soon, please? ~flamey

Well.....I just HAD to say something about this chapter. I'ma be completely honest and tells ya that the beginning of the story was making me kinda nervous cause I was really hoping that Spike wouldn't get to sleep with Buffy first. I was totally rootin for William. And every chapter I was nervous that THAT chapter would be the one where Spike fucked Biffy first. So I kinda put off reading it til later. (Later equals like 5 minutes later. :P ) I just was hopin that William could fuck Buffy first then flaunt it in front of Spike cause Spike was being all cocky and shit. But then I thought about it a lil more and realized that William being assertive and trying to get into Buffy's pants wouldn't have fit his character. The only way William would have gotten to Buffy first is if Buffy came to him. But then, THAT wouldn't have happened cause she was trying to fight her attraction to them the entire story. So then I KNEW that it had to have been Spike to get to her first. I really really really liked the way you did them gettin together too. I don't know if I woulda liked it if Spike's little plan of seduction with her would have worked. I loved how you made her get mad at him and start yelling at him and making him feel like overall shit. It made whenever they got together later seem so much better and I was happy that they did. I loved how you dealt with William too. How he was so upset over Spike and Buffy fuckin' and how he felt so alone now that he thinks that he doesn't have anyone. You've got me really really wanting to read the next chapter. This is probably one of my favorites from you now. You've done an awesome job on the characterization, and just writing the story. It flows so well and you just get me so caught up in it. This had to have been my favorite chapter so far. I think I may make a lil ficart for ya of just that chapter. :) And I STILL needs ta get yo birfday prezzie. It'll get there....once I don't have so much shit due and I can think more on it. :) Today's my own sister's birthday and I couldn't get her anything cause i've been so busy. So ya see....I'ma bit behind on my shit. :P

I hope the next chapter comes soon!! :D

Love ya homes! :)

Oh my god. I'm crying. Poor William. Ahh! Can't stand it. Make it better, please?

The reactions of your characters are very realistic, which helps make this fic enjoyable. That and the smut.

Yet another sexy chapter. This is a really naughty wonderful story. Can't wait for you next chapter.

some buffy action finally.... but poor will =(