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for The Sitter

by Roberta

person Tk
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing Pagan, always know it's going to be a must read. I can't wait for more.
ilovespike - this is ~ fan?ta?sy IE: imagination unrestricted by reality; The creative imagination; unrestrained fancy. ~ If you don't like it don't read it and just go away, instead of going all out stalker.

P.S. Your flames need a beta.
person SF
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two is always better than one or that is what I here.

I didn?t think anyone could out do Kantayra?s ?Double Spiked? for the idea of multiple Spikes , but your coming damn close, and I?ve only read the first chapter.

It is a fantastic and very original inspiration and can't wait to read more.

SF


person Rhonda
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twins! *bounces* Spike Twins!! *bounces* I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. You've got a great story setup, all we need now is to put the three of them in the same room. *bounces* More please!
person Karen
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Can't wait for more! Read your LJ about those who were putting it down. Sorry to hear that. You made it clear fromt he begining what the fic was about, you couldn't do anything more to warn them. I love the twins idea and you write marvvvvelous, babe! I'm just glad I don't live in a box ;) smoochies
person Jewls
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man, you never fail to suprise me with your plots. And I know you are brilliant with smut, and while this is...different, lol. I know you'll pull it off really really well. In anyone elses hands..I'd be worried. But you...you can make anything great. *sigh* ok..lets go. *grins*
person Emma
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As usual, this story is well written and humorous. I've loved all your stories, and I doubt this will be an exception! Write more soon!
person gattaca
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME start! I read this already on your LJ, but HAD to review it here. :) And I still really wanna whoop that chick's ass fo sho. NO ONE insults my favorite author and gets away with it!!! NNOOOOOOOOOO ONE! *cracks fingers* Bring the bitch on!!!!! :P

Can't wait for more of this story!!!!! :D
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay...even though i am icked out by the idea of incest and am not gonna chaneg my mind about that... i am still can't resist a story where I... ummm mea mean Buffy...heh heh heh... gets to geton won with Spike and William.. (or two spikes... which is a fanfic at www.bsdiaries. com titled "Double Spiked". go read it...you will orgasm jsut from reading it...)

anyhoo... i could care less really about spike and william getting on...as long as i get to watch...

i mean how hot is that... yeh incest is illega; and kinda icky... but its spike incest... that makes up for the ick factor...

great idea....now get to the smoochies...
person Sarah Aless
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looove the premise - great first chapter but I'm anxious for the smut. More please more more more.
Also, ignore the people who can't seperate fantasy from r/l. Incis nis not something that I would even put anywhere near my personal list of fantasies (and believe me theres some weird, wonderful, warped and strange ones on there) however - 1) You are such a talented author that I know I'll enjoy it in this fic - 2)It's fiction, it ain't gonna bite, if there's something that really doesn't do it for me in a particular fic I just skim that particular bit (as I said though, probably won't skim this one cos you could make ANYTHING hot!). Pity more people can't do that or alternatively just stay the hell away from somehting that has clear warnings about something they know they won't like.
Sarah
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person Nicky
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very promising...and the fact that it's by you makes it much more promising.

Like i always say, i've read all your stuff and you've never disapointed.

Can't wait to get into it more, so update soon please.

Nicky