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for The Sitter

by Roberta

person sluggie
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHHHHHHHH..you're kil me me PB...give us more..please..please..please.
person Nicky
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He he...naughty, naughty.

I'm loving the whole bad boy/good boy thing. I like William, but Spike really is something, isn't he?

I'll be checking for updates!

nicky
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is great so far--and I don't usually like AU fics. It's nice to see a smut fic that is also well written with good characterization. The voice of "Spike" is especially on target. Don't listen to immature flamers and keep pushing the envelope because you are an excellent writer and this fic is red hot.
person Stormybreeze
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
come on come on get to the good stuff. you little tease
person Nicky
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Baby!

Still going well i see. You know i'm gonna say your amazing...what else is there to say? Loving this so far, looking forward to some more...and how HOT are those two boys? Oh damn...to be the meat in a Spike/William sandwich...*drools*

Also, to anyone else who's sad enough to bother insulting our Pagen, then you better read up on some physcology.

Basically you only insult the writer because you have trouble admitting that ites yes you hot.

Call me on it if i'm wrong...but isn't it just easier to go with the flow? If your getting horny...GET HORNY! Join the party!

Nicky
person sluggie
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovin' it. Can't wait for more, more, more.
person Sarah Aless
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol!!!!!!!!!!! What stormy breeze said!
Great chapter - but I wantmore more more......please!!!!rah rah
x
person patty
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, the only part that grossed me out was Spike eating pot
roast with his fingers. :-D

Everything else was of the VERY good.

Pattyanne
person Kar
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, another great chapter. The boys are so cute in their discovery of mutual sexual pleasure and their fight over Buffy's chair
person Des
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome as usual!!! can't wait to read more!