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for The Sitter

by Roberta

person Stormybreeze
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean to be rude but come on already just the idea of twins william and spike can make a girl wet I need more, anything I'll give you anything just help a girl out will ya. And anyone who finds it inappropriate can kiss my *****
person Emma
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so awesome! Not to mention funny. I love your writing, because some authors just jump right in but you actually have character development, and tons of UST! It's awesome, write more soon!
person della
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing girl I love what your doing this is such a good work of FANTASY and fiction. Can't wait for more chapters.
person white rabbit
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Very hot!...write more...please...soon
person Caroline
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very hot , very naughty plot , Pagan ! But I know that you will handle things greatly. The first three chapters are good , and Buffy is in a dangerous situation with Spike flirting so blatantly with her.. It's a nice idea to put together the two personalities of the man : confident Spike , shy William , but so sexy the two of them ! I look forward to the next installements.
person Sarah Aless
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!!!!!!!!! Spikes such a NAUGHTY boy isn't he. That was excellent - poor Buffy, how could she not react like that, he's such a tease. Oh more more more.
Sarah
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person regent
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to pop in and say I'm really enjoying this. I've been reading SQ too (which I enjoy immensely), but I think this one is flowing better. I'm hoping that somewhere down the road, Faith gets invited over for a cookout or --something--. Keep up the good work, and don't listen to zealots. It's like John Lennon said - I've had enough of reading things By neurotic - psychotic - pig headed politicians... just gimme some truth.
person caden
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really really good story! cant wait to see more of that w/s/b hotness!
person Azrielle
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent!! Nice solid build up. Keep going with this...
person karen
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That big shit! haha. Loved the chapter. poor William leaving and missing Buffy in a bikini. I hope that mean ole Spike walks in on his "ponce" of a brother and Buffy making out. Teach Spike to soak nude ;)