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for The Sitter

by Roberta

person sluggie
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guh. Killing me here, PB... but what a sweet death...

person Renee
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved how Spike was scared before he gave William the blowjob. It showed a nice vulnerabilty side to him.

Renee
person Jenn
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have totally corrupted me with all of your hot stories....Thanks :)
person nat
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I need a very, very cold shower. Can't wait for more porn.....(um) story, I mean.
person Nicky
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just checked your reviews before i reviewed myself...glad to see you haven't gotten anymore idiots reviewing you. Hopefully they took the hint!

Hot chapter...loved that Spike was nervous too, and that he admitted it.

Apparently everyone who walks in that house loses the ability to BE QUIET during sex...everyone is catching each other...how fun!

You know we want more...and you have already started writing the next chapter, because you know this...

:D

Nicky
person lolita
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phew now that was hot, and so good, oh how I love this plot, please write more soon, it's not fair to leave us in suspense, ;)
person Des
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!! you're so cruel!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!

this is a great story!!!
person Suzy
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, that was so fucking hot I think my computer is on fire, and I'm about to slide of my chair, like a fucking puddle of goo.
Your description of the twins together was, of course, sexy as hell, but also so real: Their insecurity, fear and lust ringing very true.
And twins may be wrong, but Christ! I think this is my favorite taboo, and you're doing it sooooo well!
So screw anybody who doesn't like it, or whatever flames you might've gotten, and just keep it coming! No pun intended :)
Hell, even though I'm devoted to Spuffy, you could keep Buffy completely out of this fic, and I'd still love it!
person white rabbit
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BLOODY HELL WOW! I'M SPEECHLESS!!
person serena
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM

God I LOVE this story

Please continue with the writing as fast as you can.

Love

serena