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for Unspoken Emotion

by kleysa

person Taylor
schedule June 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was very good!Please continue it even more!
person AmbushU
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write realy well not like most who dont take the time to revise there writing and the plot was simple but exiting .
person Akuumi
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was good. how'd u get so good? i liked it alot...
person AllyOop
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know it probably wasn't meant to, but this story made me laugh my ass off. The part where you talked about Spike and the wallpaper... and the part where you talked about American Pie had me laughing so hard I thought I'd die... and I am yet to figure out why.

Maybe it's because you're an awesome writer?

Thanx for some reading I definitely enjoyed,

AllyOop
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
tres magnificent.

That was very well done, i am hoping that there will be more?!?
person Melrick
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, very sexy. I like it that you go to the trouble of setting up a plot rather than just jumping straight into the sex. The anticipation only adds to it!