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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just finished reading the epilouge...it was great...thanks, i'll look out for any other stories with your name on them...
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Not to be picky.....but how about having Spike and Buffy talk about safe sex......Hd und unprotected sex in the back of a John's car.....and then raped by dirty dies.ies......he would have had an aides test done after the rape and told to practice....NO sex or very very very save sex until recheck......usually in a six month period.....and again in 1 year. Otherwise I really like the story and the overcoming the hardships and working on the relationship......
Kimber
Not to be picky.....but how about having Spike and Buffy talk about safe sex......Hd und unprotected sex in the back of a John's car.....and then raped by dirty dies.ies......he would have had an aides test done after the rape and told to practice....NO sex or very very very save sex until recheck......usually in a six month period.....and again in 1 year. Otherwise I really like the story and the overcoming the hardships and working on the relationship......
Kimber
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hank and angel got what they deserved and evee ele else got a happy ending...which was all very well written...i've really enjoyed your story and i'm looking forward to the epilouge...with lots of smut please.
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good point that kimba made about the safe sex...but lets remember this is the world of (fan fiction) or (fan fantasty) where for the purpose of the story certain things don't always aplly. As they do AND should in real life. Fan fiction is pure escapeism from the harsh realities of life, it's why i read it! surely it's why we all read it!!!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A/N: White Rabbit is correct re: fan fiction and the land of fantasy, however, I purposely pointed out that the john Spike had sex with didn't wear a condom, for a reason. The story isn't finished yet so please be patient before jumping to conclusions. :-)
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neither of them were very prepossessing characters - a boy toy male hooker and a rich girl picking up a john, but it turned out to be a real fun ride. Thanks!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Very good.
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Great ending.... I only have one pet peeve, he would not have infected her.....ONE of the first rules of treating Rape victims is treating for the 2 most hightest form of sexually transmitted diseases Chlamydia being one of them.....so He would have left the hospital with the antibiotics already given....and told to have protected sex for the next 6 months to a year because He would have had HIV testing through out that time, especially being a high risk player and victim......Also the men have symptoms of buring with urination and yellow discharge from their penis with in 3-7 days after exposure, and his anus/colon/intestine would have been inflamed.....and after a couple months Buffy would have had pelivic inflammatory disease symptoms and really in pain. It's only a week or two at the most that the woman will have symptoms with yellow vaginal stinky discharge....and lower abdomnial pain. So if she became infected after Spike came home, then most who understand the disease and the process of taking care ofe vie victims would be looking at her and saying....."Yeah, and the world is flat and you live in a world of peace and harmony." I know this is fanfiction.....but something as important this, the ER nurse and Rape advocate in me had to say something so others might not get the wrong idea.......
Great ending.... I only have one pet peeve, he would not have infected her.....ONE of the first rules of treating Rape victims is treating for the 2 most hightest form of sexually transmitted diseases Chlamydia being one of them.....so He would have left the hospital with the antibiotics already given....and told to have protected sex for the next 6 months to a year because He would have had HIV testing through out that time, especially being a high risk player and victim......Also the men have symptoms of buring with urination and yellow discharge from their penis with in 3-7 days after exposure, and his anus/colon/intestine would have been inflamed.....and after a couple months Buffy would have had pelivic inflammatory disease symptoms and really in pain. It's only a week or two at the most that the woman will have symptoms with yellow vaginal stinky discharge....and lower abdomnial pain. So if she became infected after Spike came home, then most who understand the disease and the process of taking care ofe vie victims would be looking at her and saying....."Yeah, and the world is flat and you live in a world of peace and harmony." I know this is fanfiction.....but something as important this, the ER nurse and Rape advocate in me had to say something so others might not get the wrong idea.......
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for thilogilogue (even though that must mean this is ending :( well anyway this story is just so great I can't wait to read what's gonna be in the next and last part update really soon :) PS theres always sequel's hehehe :) stories the greatest!!! :)
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, another chapter! Thank goodness Buffy arrived in the nick of time. Hope you give Hank and Angel what they deserve.