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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
have to agree with the reviewer about the song...had major flash backs to 'JAWS' shudder...shudder i hate sharks. but i loved the drunken singing. maybe you could manoeuvre spike and buffy into another drinking binge and have them singing 'what shall we do with the drunken sailor' Oh! maybe a beach setting with lots of surf and sex and more drunen singing. lol
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Anne, the spanking was vcutecute and also playful. Chapter 2 was very hot and I'm looking forward to more. :)
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! keep writing!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2 was really really good. they smut was very well written & i love the way you incorperated the fun and laughter in the begining. those 2 never luaghed that much especially together on the show. *shakes head sadly* i think you are doing a great job & i encourage you ontiontinue this story. i look forward to what else you can coem up w/. & the spanking worked out perfectly they way you wrote it... as something fun & not humiliating.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It didn't put me off. It was a cute spanking, not a painful one. Anyway, it's a great
story and I'm looking forward to lots more of it.
story and I'm looking forward to lots more of it.
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the spanking was WOW! very smutty but funny at the same time and the sex was lets face it to be expected from spike and buffy...keep them doing their own thing you should be true to your characters it makes better reading...please update soon i can't wait to see what they'll do next.
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February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is definitely working! And you really have to continue it. I'm not kidding.
You have to...it's a law! When you start something this good, you have to
finish it or you'll be in big trouble, missy! Looking forward to the...well,
YOU know what we're looking forward to.
You have to...it's a law! When you start something this good, you have to
finish it or you'll be in big trouble, missy! Looking forward to the...well,
YOU know what we're looking forward to.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more more more more! *bouncing on edge of seat like hyper child unleashed in a candy store* Excellent start and I love the premise. These two are always so much fun drunk. Only downside is I can't get that song outta my head! *groans and begins singing "Show me the way to go home" again* Does anyone else always flashback to Jaws when they see/hear/read/think about that song?
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh! you meanie! you stopped before any lemons, no fair!!! Drunk Spike and the Slayer, always good for a laugh. Can't wait for the next chappie. I agree with you about the unfairness of Anya's jilting, but hey, that's why there's the glorious world of fanficdom to right these glaring wrongs :o) Keep writing!
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start. looking forward to at least 10 more chapters, 8 at least full of that smutt you are promising.