rate_review Reviews

Like all her other stories this one is fabulous!
Again lemonychocolate shows that she is one of the greatest fanfic/slash writers out there.
Her strength lies in the long, the deep digging stories where she crafts something complex and new
and where she creats interessting character developments and well-thought-through AU and/or storylines.
Thats also the case here.
Read this Xancentric story to see the intelligent presented switch of the "normal" places
where for example Scoobies are in truth evil and where there is more to vampires than we knew.
Dear lemonychocolate please continue this and also your other works!
Thanks!
:-)

I loved this fic. I would love to see Willow somehow return to Xan and the gang, but I am so excitec by this relationship you started with Angel and Xander. Will Wes possibly ever join in?

Given that I usually hate stories that bash one or more characters, I always give them a chance to validate this treatment. Boy, am I glad I did! Am enjoying this story thoroughly and can't wait for how much more creativity you'll show when the New York contingent get their vengeance on the Sunnydale betrayers. Ethan & Cordy are a very good combination, I love it! Please tell me you'll have a scene or two of the 'Gruesome Twosome' tormenting the betrayers? About the only critique I have is that unless I'm wrong, Ethan usually called Giles either Rupert or Ripper, not Giles. Ethan wasn't around the gang long enough to pick up the kids' nickname for Giles. Please, keep writing, love the new characters you've created.

Damn.
I'm not really into the slash stuff, but this story is so strong. You can see the pain Xander goes through, and how it changes him. The end to part 2 is great, maybe they'll see what they're doing is wrong, or maybe just Willow. It's just unfortunate that the way you showed the school reacting is so true.

I don't know how to tell you this, but I think I love you (wow, I sound like a creepy stalker). You write some of the yummiest A/X fic out there and this story is no exception. Thank you for writing! Keep up the good work.

I think your doing a wonderful job with this story. I love how the vampires are training Xander, Cordy, and F. An. And I can't wait to see them go up against Giles, Oz, and Buffy. I haven't made up my mind yet about Willow. I don't feel bad about her being stuck with Buffy though, she chose them over Xander. Great writting. More please.

WOW!!! I love this story, I love having Giles and Buffy as mean and selfish. Of course not much of a stretch for Buffy, but wri writing and what a great turn having them go to be trained with the older vamps. It's wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Just wanted to say I like this story.I want Xander to be stronger than Buffy and Oz. I can't wait for some payback. Looking forward to seeing Buffy's reaction to Xander being bonded to Angel. That should make for a few laughs. All and all I think your doing a great job. Update soon.