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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't review each chapter though I intended to. I have really enjoyed this story. It's amazing how you've given us a world that is so utterly different yet believable. The picture you've painted of Giles & Buffy was done very well and I'm both appalled at their behavior and yet thinking 'uh huh, exactly!'.
Where to start with the overall review. You've created amazing characters for us to enjoy and a plotline that has many twists and evolves with the story. It doesn't feel cut and dried like some stories and you know there is so much more than can be said but you can't giving us everything right away.
Thank you for making Cordelia a part of the story and not just a bystander, the same for Faith. I think they are both incredibly strong characters in their own right and too many gloss over them.
Spike is delicious, Drusilla is quirky and lovable, Angel(us) is gorgeous and passionate, Wesley has a backbone but isn't completely non-Wes, your other vampires are amazingly written .. .
I'm sorry I just can't adequately tell you how much I've enjoyed this story and all the thousands of things that make it so incredible.
Way too much to compliment .. the vampire culture, the spells, the character of the Protector, etc etc.
Thank you and I look forward to reading the rest.
Where to start with the overall review. You've created amazing characters for us to enjoy and a plotline that has many twists and evolves with the story. It doesn't feel cut and dried like some stories and you know there is so much more than can be said but you can't giving us everything right away.
Thank you for making Cordelia a part of the story and not just a bystander, the same for Faith. I think they are both incredibly strong characters in their own right and too many gloss over them.
Spike is delicious, Drusilla is quirky and lovable, Angel(us) is gorgeous and passionate, Wesley has a backbone but isn't completely non-Wes, your other vampires are amazingly written .. .
I'm sorry I just can't adequately tell you how much I've enjoyed this story and all the thousands of things that make it so incredible.
Way too much to compliment .. the vampire culture, the spells, the character of the Protector, etc etc.
Thank you and I look forward to reading the rest.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chap 12 was just freaking funny @ the end. Sides hurting...
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh gggggooooddddd! I really like your story and hope u contine and update soon. carry on the good work and it this story is done please make a squal soon because this is a really great story.
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi just read your fan fiction and I really liked it and was wondering whan you are going to update next and if you lost interest in it I and others would probably like to know.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has one of the best Angel/Xander plots I're read so far.
Thanks.
Thanks.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally excellent. Angsty and put us in a bad mood (initially). :) Daf & Dxxoo
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where ever you are getting your ideas for this story keep em coming. Chapter 10 has to be my favorite chapter yet. From how horrible Xander's parents are to how they laid that trap out for Giles and Buffy. I fill sad for Willow but she bought it on herself. I mean Xander's been her friend longer then Buffy and she just drop him for her. I loved every part to this chapter. You definitely made my day. Thanks.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the other chapters, but I wanted to comment on all of them together. This is a great story. But this last chapter got me teary eyed. Okay so it wasn't just this chapter, but it was the best. I did catch on to what was happening with Faith, but you took it in a direction I didn't think about. I figure that after the battle Buffy would lose her slayer powers, but I didn't think that Faith was coming back. Did I miss something? They were fighting the demons and next thing there in the library. Did they defeat the demons or what?
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At the beginning I thought this was going to be a purely slash fic, but you actually created this excellent story. Awesome, it's absolutely awesome, i can't wait to read more. Oh, and will Cordy become a vamp instead?
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another GREAT story. Keep it up, I'm loving it:)