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March 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Damn unwanted visitors! Right when I thought the yummyness would happen too :) please write more soon, really looking forward to how this one ends up!
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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was fantastic, poor Xander, Spike and Angel, hope you can update soon, I'd love to see them get rid of the scoobies so that they can finish what they started.
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November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Absolutely love it. I really hope there's more to it. :D Congrats!
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i know it says it's been a little while since you updated but I'm really really hoping you're still planning on continuing this fic. I've been trying to find a good fic with these three for quiet a while and I love this one! Please continue if you can, 'cause it's a really really REALLY good story!!!
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm not sure if you still write or even read fiction, but thought I'd review either way. (Part of my new year's resolutions to review every fic that I finished reading).
It's a shame that you didn't finish the story, it was really good. I especially liked the way you wrote Xander's internal babble. It has just the right amount of well, everything that makes Xander Xander. And somehow all other characters seem to be canon even though everything is not canon. You captured the essence of every person there, but not simply copied the chartacters from the series, you added some of your own flavor so that everything is sexier, spicier, just somehow more and better than it originally was.
I'm not really a fan of repeating the situation in a diffrent point of view. You know, where there is first the part where everything is from Xander's point of view, then there is the part where everything is described one more time in Spike's or Angel's point of view. I prefer when the author picks one and sticks to it. But still, you somehow made it work, you don't repeat the whole scene, just the most important parts, which is okay.
And of course, there is one of my favourite pairings - X/A/S so, kudos for that.
All in all, It's a real shame that you didn't finish the fic.
It's a shame that you didn't finish the story, it was really good. I especially liked the way you wrote Xander's internal babble. It has just the right amount of well, everything that makes Xander Xander. And somehow all other characters seem to be canon even though everything is not canon. You captured the essence of every person there, but not simply copied the chartacters from the series, you added some of your own flavor so that everything is sexier, spicier, just somehow more and better than it originally was.
I'm not really a fan of repeating the situation in a diffrent point of view. You know, where there is first the part where everything is from Xander's point of view, then there is the part where everything is described one more time in Spike's or Angel's point of view. I prefer when the author picks one and sticks to it. But still, you somehow made it work, you don't repeat the whole scene, just the most important parts, which is okay.
And of course, there is one of my favourite pairings - X/A/S so, kudos for that.
All in all, It's a real shame that you didn't finish the fic.
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How can you leave it like that?! lol, I think it's great so far, had me giggling and woke me up a bit too. Pleaseee update soon.
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good hope you don't stop now
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More?
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story! I love the Xander/Angel pairings and then mix Spike in there and you got a sexy combination. You're doing really great, and I hope that you update really soon! Poor Xander gotta be hurting!
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EVIL! YOU. ARE. POSITIVELY. EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hot and heavy then BAM scoobies. pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaseeeee keep going! It's sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!