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by machine

person kat
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story. I have to admit though that I thought the ending was a bit lacking. I would have wanted her to go off and try to get him back. She doesn't deserve such understanding from him.
person Spikefan
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry but Spike deserved better than this. He needs someone without all the garbage Buffy put him through.
person Tiffany
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was...angsty what's gonna happen next
person Azrielle
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
person AnneLiz
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great fic, Machine!
I really loved it... you put together the angst, the death, the anger, the love... just like you promised in the summary!
I so liked the end... she couldn't spend another day without hi oh, oh, yeah...
Compliments, and now update '7 lucky men' :)
person white rabbit
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story, i just loved all of it. i'm glad you had the courage to admit that you wrote so much of yourself into it, try to think of it in these terms,a good author will write about what they know but a great author will write about what they feel, again i say great story. thanks
person Karrie
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. You write very well, and I think the motions the characters felt were described very well and realistically.
person white rabbit
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the most interesting stories going at the moment...your characters seem very real and the story line is really good...can't wait to read more...keep it real as it works so well...update ple please
person SpikeLover
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a depressing fic. I feel bad for Spike he needs to move on and find someone to love him and who's not so messed up like Buffy.
person Lauren
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. The complexities of Spike are great. I think this is one of your best stories. Please update soon!