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for A Friend in Need

by Legolaslover

person Puff
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Blow the Buffy bich sky high!
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI, sorry it took me so long to review. I really liked this chapter. Lindsey!!!!! I love Lindsey!! LOL He's in loooove! LMAO! Anyway, I liked that it was a plant they needed to cure Giles. Maybe in the next one you could have Lindsey explian what kind of plant it was and why it worked....and how he knew that they needed it. That Lindsey! He's so sneaky! LOL
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!
person RemityGirl
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More...Please...soon??? Got to see that Giles gets better.... Thanks
person Tris
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good charachterization I liked Lorne in particular. I do hope Giles gets better! I lost some love for him in the last season; but hell he's Giles. LOL Anyway Keep writing and don't give up!
person YEHUDIS
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope buffy has something extremely nasty happens to her and giles gets better right i hope so and let xander do some kind of damage to buffy and please continue
person E
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can?t stop NOW! What happens to Giles? Good story but what an awful place to stop:) Hope you?ll update soon...
person que bel
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update!
person FainpatheElanesse
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, i'm just not really seeing how this fic works...I'm not a flamer, i just wanted to point some things out. You don't seem to have really explained why Buffy's acting the way she is. It just seems so completely OOC as to make her a different character altogether. I know you're wanting to portray her as unsympathetic but there is no power on this earth that i can see that would make her act that way, especially towards Dawn, and Giles. Also, some of the changes you made: Why not kill Anya? I do love her character, but having her run off with another demon or get killed by the First - there's not much difference, she's still out of the story. And Angel not getting Wolfram and Hart - what difference does that make to the story? The relationships also seem a little rushed. As far as we know, this is Xander's first gay relationship - he wouldn't be rushing into it like this. and Giles and Ethan - they've suddenly leapt back into each others arms after being enemies for years? I'm sorry, I just don't see it.
I like the rest of your stories, but i have to say that this one has really disappointed me. If you would like to explain your choices for the story/challenge my criticism, please, email me.
person Neo
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking this fic. I cannot wait for you to update it. Please update as soon as you can.