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for 7 lucky Men

by machine

person Angi
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Straight to the gut and further! You?re doing good!! Go on, please.
person MissKitty
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WChriChris. You know I love all of your fics, but this is outstanding. Carry on, I beg you! I'm always here if you need a little help and want me to take a look at future chapters... *hint hint*

Fabulous, hun. Words cannot describe.

~ Aim x
person Cat
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very enjoyable, and very well written even without a beta on it. Please continue...soon.
person Mandi
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story so far. Very interesting plot. Looking forward to reading more. :)
person Nicky
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the mention!

And I plan to continue to make your day, as long as you continue to make mine by updating. I don't care how often, as long as you finish it. This is just getting better and better.

I am loving the story line, i've never seen anything lit. It. It seems that fate is playing games with our characters, and i love your take on destiny.

Keep it coming.

Nicky
person Nicky
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...

Are you continuing this or is it a single? I'd like you to carry it on, it could be interesting, but as a single it's powerful.

"Goldilocks, i am that man."

That is 'so' Spike. Some people can't write Spike, but you wrote him. You made the character in ONE line.

That, is great writing.

Nicky
person Jen
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good start! se wse write more!
person Calda
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea and the way you write. Keep going!
person AnneLiz
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's a great idea for a story, Machine, and I'm really happy that you adopted it!
I also read an other of your fics, "20 Months", and I loved it... I really liked your writing, so I'll be waiting to read the other chapters of "7 lucky Men"!
Continue soon!

**AnneLiz-Alexandra**
person Amy
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT!! but you kept saying six in the latter paragraphs instead of seven...thought you might want to know....other than that GREAT!! keep it comming