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December 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, please update soon
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the set up, the roles you assigned the characters :D
It's challenging to write a story with a child in it. Usually people just use the child when it's needed and forget all about it when it's not. But you succeeded! You didn't put Bran in a corner, not even once. That made it believable, realistic and enjoyable :D
I also liked how easy it was to read :) Your flow was good ;D
I liked and enjoyed this story a lot!
It's challenging to write a story with a child in it. Usually people just use the child when it's needed and forget all about it when it's not. But you succeeded! You didn't put Bran in a corner, not even once. That made it believable, realistic and enjoyable :D
I also liked how easy it was to read :) Your flow was good ;D
I liked and enjoyed this story a lot!
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this AU story!!! Great work!!! More pleaseeeee?..:)
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am SO loving this story, when will you be posting the next chapter (or chapters...)? I'm glad you didn't let Xander give in so easily to Joyce (hope it's not full blown parent/d lod love in the end he's been through too much in his life for that to happen). It's right that Bran is allowed to get to know her but Xander doesn't have to love her, at least he likes her slightly, which is enough. Spike and Xander are lovely together and Bran is so cute (loving that child). More please, more....and soon. :-)
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished all 16 chapters available for "Salvation"....wow!! So beautifully done. Love the way Spike is the wary one instead of Xander...if you aren't finished...let me know when you update!! - even if you don't, I will check back often...plus, you have your website posted. Will check there, too. Thanks for the great read!!!....I say great, but I mean fan-tab-u-lous!!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ABOUT TIME! it was cute, yay.:D
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story!!!! I'm so happy that you posted and I'll probably be late for work because I just had to read Chapter 16. I totally agree with the concept that a hottie like Xander could make a man come out of the closet. Pleas post again soon.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favourite fics! Update! Update!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is absolutely amazing! I think I'll just glue myself to my computer chair and stay awake 24/7 waiting for chapter after chapter. Activity and sleep are overrated anyway. ;)
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15
Awwww! Cute! YAY! Spike, our hero! :D More, more, more! LOL
Awwww! Cute! YAY! Spike, our hero! :D More, more, more! LOL