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for Losing It

by Kye

person kai
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. Can't wait to read the rest.
person d
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 19 -

I loved this chapter. I thought it was great from beginning to end, just like the other 18. Little nit pick - earlier, Faith had a Mustang that they drove out to the beach and they came back in an SUV. Little confusing. The only other complaint. How can you end the chapter where you did!!! That's just mean!!! Please write faster.
person Queen Zulu
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh. This is a hot story, yo. I really enjoyed chapters 7 and 18. I mean, really enjoyed. Ahem. If you know what I mean.
person Wicked
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, more, moooore! Don't make me beg - it's not pretty when *I* beg!
person Kye
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for catching that for me d. It was late when I wrote that chapter and I didn't even realize it. It makes me feel good to know that someone out there is paying that much attention to my story. Thanks again. ^_^
person Amy
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! i am really loving this fic. wanna the best! well for me anyways. U gotta update. Like pretty quickly :D
person kai
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When's the next chapter?
person Haggis
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this just keeps getting better and better.

Don't you dare stop now!
person Diva
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was well worth the wait. I loved all of it. Thank you.

Diva
person JustMe
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After all this time you still have to ask us what we think?! It was amazing! definitly worth the wait!
Keep it *coming* ^,-