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for Losing It

by Kye

person Electra126
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! I can't believe Buffy left like that! How could anyone leave Faith?!? I know I couldn't!!! ;)
Anyhow, I'm highly anticipating the sequel. Nice job. :)
person lele angel03
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just thought of something...the spell is just temporary right? faith isn't going to keep it is she?
person alex
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg. that was the best chapter yet. i like what you did with the fake cock thing and willow. nice. at first i couldnt figure it out but at the end of the love making scene i figured it out. and i applaude you. because your story here is one of my favorites and i love your writing and cant wait for the next chappie and sequal. thank you in future reference for the next sequal.
person callistosbitch
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oohh! Baby!
person Diva
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I d thd the surprise twist at the end. I thought it looked like everything was leading up to that with how Faith was reacting to the cock and Buffy as well. Good old Willow, just hope Buffy and Faith are happy with the surprise of a child without their knowledge.

Diva
person michelle
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kye,


I just found this story today & I don't know how I missed it before. I can say that I am on chapter 5 now & I love it. I love how you are writing Buffy's POV & how she feels about losing her virginity. I am going to try and read all the chapters that u have writen today & I can't wait for more. Great job!!!!
person Kye
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dylan...everyone is entitled to an opinion and thats yours. From one writer to the next, I respect that. I was more than sure not everyone would get or even like it, but like I said...I had to follow my inspiration. As one of your biggest fans I must say that not everything you write always hits home with me either, but I still respect and enjoy your writing immensely, because its just that...yours.
person kai
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great update. I can't wait to read what happens next. It's getting so good. Keep it coming.
person Ashley
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite fanfic of all the ones I have read. And I just want to say thank-you for continuing it. I am really excited to see whats goin hap happen next!
person Michelle
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I just finished all 21 chapters of this story today. U had me worried at 1st when I read your disclaimer at the 1st of ch 21. I thought it would be something bad, but it wasn't & u totally surprised me w/ the end. I am So looking forward to the sequel-Bring it on!!!!. I am amazed bu your writing-one of my Fav fics EVER!!!. I loved how u described their love & it not just about Sex only. I am so gonna check out your other stories.