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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're story does not suck. a few typos, but that' s no big deal. the plot is really good & so is the smut. i like the ending because you left it wide open to continue the sotry & i really think you should. i can definitly make this in't something big. i see lots of smut, angst, and misguided affections in the near future for this story. please continue you it!!!
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was jusnna nna tell you I wanted to read more, and suggest you turn it into a full fic. Then I read your question about it. Yeah, go for it. Yes, Spike's being a bit of a jerk (kinda like with Harmony). Buffy is just the innocent young girl she was in the beginning of the show. Either way, I'd be interested to find out where you took these two in an ongoing fling.
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this was a really good story, but some of it was unclear (the end, mainly). it was good, but unclear. i think if you wanna clear stuff up and expand on it to make a longer fic that would be really cool. i'd defenitely read it, even if the spuffy ship is starting to get repetitive, i think you can make this really cool.
--ValidatedHatred
--ValidatedHatred
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I really liked this fic , I hope you're going to update soon, cause this fic rocks. c ya
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't suck at all. I DO think, though, that you should look
into having a beta read it over first if you intend to continue. Some-
times spelling and punctuation errors can detract from a story. But
don't stop writing, no matter what.
into having a beta read it over first if you intend to continue. Some-
times spelling and punctuation errors can detract from a story. But
don't stop writing, no matter what.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story is dark, but good. It'd be interesting to see how their relationship changes. Keep writing! Thanks =)
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MAKE IT A FICT PLEASE!!!!!!!!! It'd be so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!