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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thik that you should make this story into a fic. It is really good, and it would be better if we got more into her life and their relationship. Great job! Keep writing.
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was wicked, don't let anybody tell you otherwise. Yeah, it was cruel, i got tears, but it was hot. You're great.
Sex is legal at 16 in England, i'd know, i'm English. I don't talk like Spike though, i'm from Liverpool. Ahh well...
So...if your other stories are as inventive as this, i'm waiting...
Nicky
Sex is legal at 16 in England, i'd know, i'm English. I don't talk like Spike though, i'm from Liverpool. Ahh well...
So...if your other stories are as inventive as this, i'm waiting...
Nicky
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's no spuffy story.
schedule
January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think you should make it into a longer story. it was good.
schedule
January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story is great. I think you shloud write more chapters (lots more) please :)
schedule
January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be an interesting fic. I'm kinda mad at spike for being a jerk but maybe he was just confused by his feelings for her.....hehe...I'm trying to rationalize for him. Anyway, it didn't suck. I like the idea very much!
schedule
January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
make it a fic
schedule
January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My ooooh My
I'm spilt in this.....one say leave it.....she should have slapped him and gave him his money back.....then again I could see such potential if what he said was true (But I don't think so) that he and his wife was getting the Big D.
So I will leave it up to you.....I will read it if you write it.....LOL
Kimber
I'm spilt in this.....one say leave it.....she should have slapped him and gave him his money back.....then again I could see such potential if what he said was true (But I don't think so) that he and his wife was getting the Big D.
So I will leave it up to you.....I will read it if you write it.....LOL
Kimber
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Sounds interesting and this Spike is a little creepy. I think its cool, look forward to seeing more
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yup more please. Spike was kinda sleazy at the end but I'll read it whether he stays that way or not cos this story has potential.
And yeah another validation on the age of consent thing, it is 16 here in Britain - is it 18 over there? or does it differ from state to state?
Sarah
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And yeah another validation on the age of consent thing, it is 16 here in Britain - is it 18 over there? or does it differ from state to state?
Sarah
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