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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww! how sad. Spike came off a little mean and cold. Poor Buffy. But the sex was good.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God.. How could he do that?! No doubt Buffy was kinda like a bitch in canon, but you can justify the ending like this! Sequel or more chapters, please!
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the beginnig was good but at the end, spike was awful!!!it was kinda sad(and sorry if i've alredy reviewed you, cuz i think i remember this story
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will you do a sequel? he treated her like a whore!!!!!!loved the story till he started to be a jerk, so do sequel, make it right!!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey you said you'd make it better - please do, I'm all sad now, and yeah Spike was a creep in this - but Buffy was a little Harmony-ish in my opinion, she seemed a little slutty and a little dumb, I would like to see how you carry this on.
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April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i don't know if that's all ur going to write, but i would love to read another chapter or a sequal to it...thank u!!!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I've read this everywhere, and Im still waiting for chapter two! I love this... are you going to finish it? Pweeeeeeeeze! Please? Do I have to beg?
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.M.G!!! when i first read your notes i thought this was gonna be Buffy/ Conner!!! I was like" He's only a baby you sick woman!!!
I was releved when i read ahead and realised it was a Spuffy ( which looking back was blindingly obviouse as i was in the Spuffy section) Ah i'm well even stupider then Xander.... and proud!
Anyway moving swiftly onwards... i loved it! even if Spike was a creep, and i dont know why i was suprised he was, because he's hardly like Saint Spike in the actual show. I reaiil like how you have Dru as the loving wife and mother..that was funny...
My favourite line:
" Mr Giles is my fathers name"
And what a poor decrepit old old man he must be...POOR GILES! I had visual images of him sitting at home in London sipping his tea, cleaning his glasses and thinking about his disapontment of a son.
And you're right, 16 is the age of consent in merry ol England, so if you get arrested, or kicked out of the country for writing Buffy as underage there, you can always come and live with me!... But only if your, really, really desperate.
I was releved when i read ahead and realised it was a Spuffy ( which looking back was blindingly obviouse as i was in the Spuffy section) Ah i'm well even stupider then Xander.... and proud!
Anyway moving swiftly onwards... i loved it! even if Spike was a creep, and i dont know why i was suprised he was, because he's hardly like Saint Spike in the actual show. I reaiil like how you have Dru as the loving wife and mother..that was funny...
My favourite line:
" Mr Giles is my fathers name"
And what a poor decrepit old old man he must be...POOR GILES! I had visual images of him sitting at home in London sipping his tea, cleaning his glasses and thinking about his disapontment of a son.
And you're right, 16 is the age of consent in merry ol England, so if you get arrested, or kicked out of the country for writing Buffy as underage there, you can always come and live with me!... But only if your, really, really desperate.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I second October's statement. I've read this everywhere it\een een posted before and I get such a naughty thrill from reading it again...hehe...would love to see this made into a full length story...nice job.
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it but one question, are you going to add on or leave me hangin'? Please hurry I can't wait to read the next chapter!