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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U prolly forgot about this fic completely....but it is good and i'd love to read more! So if u can plz continue the story!
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OKay
I'm confused.....so will this be Spuffy, or is some coming to town to show Buffy what love really is and she will be paired with them or it will happen to Spike and someone will show him what being is love it really all about......Is anyone else still at the Bronze while their are dothe the nasty....and where did Oz and Xander go? Is Anya still there?
Kimber
I'm confused.....so will this be Spuffy, or is some coming to town to show Buffy what love really is and she will be paired with them or it will happen to Spike and someone will show him what being is love it really all about......Is anyone else still at the Bronze while their are dothe the nasty....and where did Oz and Xander go? Is Anya still there?
Kimber
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happens next? I like it very much. Keep going.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it, please keep writing. Just curious though, about the background. Could you clarify that?
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least it's a little clearer, but you really should get a beta reader. It'll help clean up the spelling and grammar errors.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This really doesn't make much sense. If you're going away fromnon,non, you really need to explain it a bit. What season are we in? Is Spike chipped? Why is he in a band with Oz? Give a bit more info before you dive into a story that is going very wid the the actual show!