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February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Was that REALLY your first attempt at Sex writing? I've read more than an unhealthy amount of adult fan fiction and even more PWPs haha
Yours is one of the best I've read ^.^ beautifully written.. And realistic! Not like some of these you see and you think *insert name here* would have NEVER done or said that..
You've written it beautifully and stayed true to the characters which is really hard to do so I give you all the kudos in the world and I hope you write more xo I'd love to read them
Kind Regards
A humble viewer
Yours is one of the best I've read ^.^ beautifully written.. And realistic! Not like some of these you see and you think *insert name here* would have NEVER done or said that..
You've written it beautifully and stayed true to the characters which is really hard to do so I give you all the kudos in the world and I hope you write more xo I'd love to read them
Kind Regards
A humble viewer
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June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is both arousing and emotionally touching. It's perfect. I don't care about the Buffy-Angel soulmate b.s.--this is so how the show should have ended. They should make this into a video.
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January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story. sweet. i love the tenderness that comes from buffy and spike. i only hope the season could end like this.
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January 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellently done, very beautiful, very real.
The only critism i would give is that there should have been some reference to the bathroom scene, though i didnt miss thinking about it, it will (see how i said will, cause we all know they are gonna do it again) effect Spike and Buffy's first time together this season.
But besides that, wonderfully done.
The only critism i would give is that there should have been some reference to the bathroom scene, though i didnt miss thinking about it, it will (see how i said will, cause we all know they are gonna do it again) effect Spike and Buffy's first time together this season.
But besides that, wonderfully done.
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January 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, Amazing another great piece of writing from you.
Like the others I just wish something like this would happen on the show.
Like the others I just wish something like this would happen on the show.
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December 31, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Great story from a fellow newbie at smuttiness! And I loved the ending! I hope that it is sort of a foreshadowing to what will really happen on the show!
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December 31, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Sweety this was perfect for your very first smut!! I loved it! hehe ;)