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for Beer Good

by Azrielle6969

person Ellashy
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh c'mon its killing me to wait this long but since the story rocks I can wait but hurry LOL.
person nat
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and it was great to see a new chapter. Please don't leave it there!! Update soon.......hopefully?
person Dolija
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep going. Please.
person Angela
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shit, cliffhanger! WHAT WAS IT???? I hope you update soon!
person lyndraco
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I gladly give you all my chocolate, please write more!
person Migya
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please post more ASAP!!! I absoultly love this storie and can't wait to read more!!!!
person Jen
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! This is so good! I can't wait to see what happens when their identities are revealed! Keep up the good work
person Kate
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story's ok but the time line is really confusing. It started out with them in college, but that last chapter was definitely back at the high school. It's ok to take stuff from different seasons, but you gotta keep straight what's going on. From what I can understand, they're still in High school but Buffy hung out with the college guys and drank the bad beer. Spike's chipped, Angel is gone, and Riley's not in the picture. The Spike/Buffy interaction is fun aexy,exy, but the story would be imporved if you get the details straight.
person Kate
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read chap. 4- sounds like your fixing all the things I mentioned in the review I just wrote. The story's a lot of fun except for that stuff- hope you continue.
person Ash
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite story that you have done. More please!!!