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for Beer Good

by Azrielle6969

schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story, love it!
person Purple Moose
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eegad! Continue soon please!
person Akasha3988
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SOOOO good. I love the claim stories, the are by far my favorite.You really need to write a new chapter too!
person BotticellisAngel
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I read it on another site awhile ago and I was really happy to find it here. I love when they can hear each others thoughts. I thought it was crappy that she couldn't hear vampires thoughts on the show. I love all the episodes you've used so far. (and you did a great job of weaving them together by the way) I also like your version better. LOL
person Sara
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you incorporate so many actual episodes and bend them to your sotry. My only problem is that for "Beer Bad" they are at the college, then for "Earshot" they are back in high school, then for "Tabula Rosa" Xander and Anya are engaged and Willow and Tara are together so they are obviously out of high school again. I think that with a small revision the "Earshot" portion of your story could be moved into the college setting to make the story more cohesive. Other than that the story is very iventive and entertainling.
person Meli
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story and how you twists the episodes around. I'm looking forward to Spike's reaction.
person Karen
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that's a new one. Xander sticking up for Spike and encouraging Buffy to date him. I think I like it. Xander always pissed me off in the show with his attitude. I like him better this way. Great story. Thanks for the update.
person jane
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god brilliant.
person Amy
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Azzy! You don't just mess with the timeline, you chop it into itty bitty pieces, toss them in a blender and then put all the pieces back in a crazy mixed up wonderful way! I can not WAIT to read more!!!! This is just a wonderful story and I'm dying for Spike and Buffy to work things out and have LOTS LOADS TONS more hot sex! :-D
person zanthinegirl
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is kind of cute, but I have to say I just can't buy Spike and the purgative/prerogative comment. Whatever else you can say about Spike, he *always* used language precisely. Also, Anya's in high school, but she's wearing an engagement ring? To whom is she engaged? I can see her and Xander engaged in later seasons, but they still seem way too young for that at this point.

Don't mean to be overly critical; this really is an awfully cute story.