rate_review Reviews

OMG, please don't tell me that's the end!! is it?? if it is, do u think there would maybe (please, i'm begging u) be a sequol??? please!!! u could have it on how spike and dru thing is going, and stuff.... ok i am big on angysty fics, but i always like it when it ends well happy, or have a sequol for it. ok, but i did like the way this ended, only i really, reaaaally want a sequol to at least see what happens next! please!!


hells_angel ( begging u still )

Hold on! Wait! Where's the rest? I need it! I neeeeed it!! Help me out here, would ya? (That's my insanity saying you're story is excellent beyond measure, would you please update as soon as humanly possible?) Great job!

I have a question... in the fourth chapter, when Buffy and Sike are at the beach, is it day, or night? I'm wondering because two lines, about 2-3 paragraphs apart, say the opposite, one day, one night. Could you help? I've included the lines... "Spike had an arm around Buffy as they made their way back to his car. Their clothes... and themselves coated in sand. Buffy was wobbling like a new-born colt. It was nearing sunset. " and ""Pfft. Right with Snyder on me for every little thing I do wrong? I wish." She sunk deep against the seat, shutting her eyes as he started the car, slowly pulling out of the parking lot just as the sun began to rise."

thanks so much!

How could you leave the chapter like that? I've been waiting forever for you to update and then when you finally do, you leave it like that? Please don't take so long in updating the next chapter. I CANNOT wait to find out what happens. Keep up the great work.
NEO

How horrible!

That was unexpected. And sooo sad. Please go on soon.

Damn...that was so sad! Please please update soon!

Wow I absolutley love this story. For the love of everything good in this world update this soon. I know that sounds a bit desperate, but this is the best freaking story every. Keep up the excellent writing.

I have been waiting forever for an update on this fic. Please don't take so long to update it. I am really liking this fic and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work
NEO

Please, Please, Please, update this story, I Love It!!! I read it somewhere a long time ago and have been waiting for an update for so long!!! Thanks for writing, and Please Update!!!