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by patty

person Jen
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Buffy's a sneaky little one! LOL. She's quite the competitor! I can't wait to see who does cave first. Keep up the good work!
person Sarah Aless
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Buffy!! What a tease - got a feeling Spikey's gonna come back swinging though!! (I hope so)
Still ABSOLUTELY loving this Patty
more PLEASE!!!
Sarah
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person Azrielle
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always, can't wait for more...
person sammygirl
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue this fic tis brill! go on girl!
person Sarah Aless
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this is in the first person Patty.
I REALLY can't wait to see whats going to happen here. I have a feeling you're going to have just as much fun with them trying to make each other lose the bet as we'll have when one of them wins :D
I can't believe how well you manage to build the tension and anticipation in just two chapters - oh yeah, now I remember, it's cos you're a genius!!! More more more please
Sarah
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person Anja
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far... can't wait for more...
Love the way you write.

Please update soon.

person emma
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea, keep writing. i hope buffy loses, kinky bondage sex and all that stuff with spike please!
person Lauren
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A bet? A Spuffy bet? How do you always know what we want you to give us? I can't WAIT to read about the stakes! Yay! I'm so excited about this story! Thanks again A Lau
person Meghan
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far, really good! Hoping for more
person luvinit
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a fun idea! you'd better follow through on your promise to make it explicit! i love the dig at riley.