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for Place Your Bets

by patty

person judith
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don't stop there. i need more.
person Emma
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really funny story! Update again soon please!
person Melanie
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is great! I can't wait for more! :)
person martin
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh u gotto update this soon!!! I really wonder what spike gets when he wins =)
person clau019
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 8 was HOT!! I wanna see S lik like that... this isn't fair.
More soon, please?
person Bugg
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, more, oh please god MORE!
person Nikki
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im gonna cry if you kme wme waiting, lol. I dont wanna cry, :)
person clau019
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another chapter! I was going crazy here, lol. So... is any of them gonna cave soon? I know I'm about to, and I'm not even part of the bet.
Keep up the good torturing work! :)
person xDiamondx
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so funny and cute! Not to mention very naughty ;-) Lol, update ASAP! I can't wait for more!
-Diamond
person Sarah Aless
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**You know goddamn well what I want you to do! I
want you to throw in your towel...scream "I can't take
it anymore!" Clear off the counter with one sweef yof your hand and lift me up on it...rip my clothes
off...kiss me andch mch me all over...lay me
down...unzip your pants and take out that great,
big....**

"Drop teaspoons of dough onto the pan and stick
it right in the...oven."

PMSL LMFAO ROFL
I just can't tell you how much I love this fic. You are a genius my dear, that was hilarious. I NEED more of this ASAP.
;)
Sarah
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