rate_review Reviews

Im sorry but i just didnt like it at all

YOW!! I really love this story. Don't mind the screenplay format; learned to read plays as a child. Such a good idea to put an immortal with Spike so they can have fun for many, many years. Are you going to write more of it or give us some deleted scenes? I'll keep looking.

Note from the author: Since the last review, which strongly recommended reading the story on my website due to formatting "issues", I have managed to get rid of most of the formatting bugs here on AFF. In fact, this archive is now more up-to-date than my website, but only because of some minor editing and re-writes. So feel free to read here or there--it shouldn't make much difference now.

Bloody fantastic! I am almost moved beyond words. THIS is Spike. You GET him. Is exactly what I needed to help me forget the mess of last season -- and whoever the hell that character is on Angel now. Brilliantly written. I must admit, hardcore spuffy fan that I am, I was a bit reluctant to accept a new love interest for my boy. Thank GLORY I did! Buffy who? The highest praise I could possibly bestow is that Miranda DESERVES Spike. What more can I say? I have to go read it again now....

One more thing -- I strongly suggest readers visit the author's website to read this story, easier formatting.

hhhhhmmmmmmmm.....gave it a try.....cool you brought in the immortals. Always love Duncan, but go gaga over Methos.......your immortal seems something like Amanda.......


Kimber

it was amazing if you intended the way the story is patterned, its set up as a play an it completely ruins a great story plzzzzz put it into a normal story style

Have to say I'm really liking this character, Miranda. I didn't think I would but you write and created her character so well that you proved me wrong. LOL
But where's the rest of part 1?

Good grief...wish these reviews had edit buttons.... I meant to say that you WROTE and created......not write....(blush)