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for Lust

by Azrielle6969

person vicann
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love how you've woven everything together. Very funny. I'm looking forward the rest of this. Big chocolate smoochies.
person Lucidity
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it! More please!!!
person Jen
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please!!! :) :) Need some more chocolate offerings? How about chocolate chip cookies and those Lindt chocolates that melt in your mouth :) Creamy chocolate frosting....I think I want some of that now! lol
person spikes bint
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please write more, I love this!!!
person Tourniquet
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! Shiny story! Write more!!!!
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* Chocolate *
* To: The Muse *
* From: Tournie *
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Merry Christmas!
person Uncouth Kitten
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Think that I could probably run to dark chocolate cherry brandy liquers for your muse, but only for a nicely risque new chapter. Merry Christmas!
person Nightmelody
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love ' Something Blue' fics! Look forward to reading more of your story.
person Kari Mouke
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story seems like it's going to be so much fun! I love the way you bridged the first chapter right into the Something Blue chapter. I can't wait for more! Thanks for something new.
person Nicky
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, keep going!


Nicky
person SarahAless
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooo yes please more moree - e - I'm prepared to send your muse chocolates.
I like what you did, adding the thoughts between the lines from the actual ep
Sarah
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