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for Cold Day in Hell

by KWCS

person kari Mouke
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It's awfully nice of you to give these little presents and a lovely way to count down to Christmas. I can't wait for tomorrow's. Thanks for your wor work.
person shippy
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of a good story. More please.
person Sarah Aless
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!!
erm........cold shower please. Absolutely delicious!!!!!!
More please
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person Gabrielle
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More please! I'm loving this story so far.
person Kari Mouke
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so amazing that I'm going to print it out. Have to keep this one. Chapter four. What can I say? Oh yeah, so damn good it almost makes me want to stop reading fan fiction so that I can leave this realm on the perfect ending. Thank you.
person bettyb
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is excellent, unique, very erotic, vivid, and very well done. more please!!
person lolita
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see a good bit of Christmas smut! lol.

This was well written and sexy as heck, you did a fantastic job on this, the characters are all so IN character too, it's as if you could see this happening on the show - you know if the show wasn't finished now and you know if the show was a porn! lol.

I can not wait to see more.

Happy Holidays!!

Lolita
person Kari Mouke
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is a delight! I love the whole skin flap thing where his fangs reside, so sexy! I can't believe that I've never come across a story where the vampire's penis changes along with his face before. Way to go on originality! I look forward to seeing what other lovely things you have in store for us. Thank you, thank you.
person Sarah Aless
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! VERY HOT!!!!! Just how I like my spuffy :D
I also love the sensitive skin where the fang comes and and the fact that his penis changes when he vamps - I agree very original!!!!!
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person Jen
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is hot. Some of the fluff is cute and some is too crazy. Whatever, have your fun, fanfiction equals denial land.